“The Underground City Of Contol”

27 Jan

The thing I truly desired was something I could not imagine would happen.

It is unusual and remarkable.

It shows you the way to a whole knew world…… that world is still unknown.

People and creatures have not discovered it and have never suspected that the whole time it was beneath them, the city of Contol.

Neither man, women, child, nor creature has dreamed of finding something so valuable.

However, the city Contol is a magical and impossible place as well. It holds dreams, passion, love, care, and mind-blowing adventures.

Who owns this city you might ask, it is the powerful and mysterious KING EDVARD.  Living in this city is extraordinary.

Instead of leaves on tree, there is money. Only the people who need it desperately can pick it.

The sunsets are stunning and the flowers are breath taking.

Houses are completely made out of pure gold.

Water is refreshing and as pure as water can be.

King Edvard’s castle is a place where anyone is welcome. There are balls to dance at and parties in the castle.

Instead of cars, there are flying carpets that have GPS’s and a steering wheel with seats as soothing as a couch.

Loosing this place is like ripping the life out of someone.

If you cry and a tear falls off your face, it will soar toward the sky. It will create a rainbow so you will stop crying because in Contol you should always be cheerful.

I find this city irresistible and I hope someday you will too… if you happen to stumble upon it… some people even compare it to heaven….

This is the underground city of CONTOL——-



4 Responses to ““The Underground City Of Contol””

  1. dam3et 2ontha February 2, 2011 at 3:33 am #

    You have a great imagination Soosoo, keep it up….
    You did a great job in your description …..

    I loved the story

    Love Seeno

    • foreveryoungpoet February 2, 2011 at 3:47 am #

      Thank you….Thank you…..

      I will become a celebrity when I grow up and you know it 😀

  2. Yasmeen February 3, 2011 at 2:29 pm #

    Yah its a really nice story
    Masha2 allah
    Good Job
    Can I somehow grow that money tree in MY backyard???:D


    • foreveryoungpoet February 3, 2011 at 4:07 pm #

      Thank you….i like this story too 😀
      When I get a money tree in my backyard, then you can get one 😀

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